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7~e,"^>T
 
                橘子红了 7~e,"^>T
 
   7~e,"^>T
 
        橘子红了 7~e,"^>T
 
        我把你捧在我的手心里 7~e,"^>T
 
        手心便把你的温暖 7~e,"^>T
 
        传到了我的心窝里 7~e,"^>T
 
        我舍不得把你含在嘴里 7~e,"^>T
 
        我想多捧会儿 7~e,"^>T
 
        好怕你的那抹红 7~e,"^>T
 
        从我的眼尖里溜走 7~e,"^>T
 
7~e,"^>T
 
        橘子红了 7~e,"^>T
 
        我小心翼翼的 7~e,"^>T
 
        扳开你红晕的外衣 7~e,"^>T
 
        有如掀开新娘的头巾 7~e,"^>T
 
        惊喜又迫不及待 7~e,"^>T
 
        猛地我的手心里 7~e,"^>T
 
        都是你那芬芳的气味 7~e,"^>T
 
        我慢慢地，慢慢地 7~e,"^>T
 
        一瓣含在嘴里 7~e,"^>T
 
        瞬间那个舌尖上 7~e,"^>T
 
        便都沾着你那甜蜜的味道 7~e,"^>T
 
7~e,"^>T
 
        橘子红了 7~e,"^>T
 
        我留下你的外衣 7~e,"^>T
 
        舀一勺清水 7~e,"^>T
 
        泡一盆芬芳 7~e,"^>T
 
        给我的母亲那双苍老的手 7~e,"^>T
 
        别再受了冻疮 7~e,"^>T
 

7~e,"^>T
 
7~e,"^>T
 
不错，很不错。 7~e,"^>T
 

7~e,"^>T
 
7~e,"^>T
 
支持，支持！ 7~e,"^>T
 

7~e,"^>T
 
7~e,"^>T
 
分享你的快乐，真开心！ 7~e,"^>T
 

橘子红了 7~e,"^>T
 
        我留下你的外衣 7~e,"^>T
 
        舀一勺清水 7~e,"^>T
 
        泡一盆芬芳 7~e,"^>T
 
        给我的母亲那双苍老的手 7~e,"^>T
 
        别再受了冻疮 7~e,"^>T
 
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7~e,"^>T
 
7~e,"^>T
 
好~~好，送你花花！ 7~e,"^>T
 

7~e,"^>T
 
7~e,"^>T
 
支持，支持！ 7~e,"^>T
 

烟儿如梦:橘子红了 7~e,"^>T
 
        我留下你的外衣 7~e,"^>T
 
        舀一勺清水 7~e,"^>T
 
        泡一盆芬芳 7~e,"^>T
 
        给我的母亲那双苍老 .. (2014-12-04 14:43)  7~e,"^>T
 

7~e,"^>T
 
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